Tuesday, 26 August 2014

show not tell

we are learning  to show not tell to make our writing interesting.
The car crashed onto the road.
The black Lamborgini  zoomed into the hospital car park and smashed into ambulance full of patients.



















Tuesday, 19 August 2014

Student Led Conferences

My mum came to room 8 yesterday it was excited   I  was  very pleased to share my learning. My favourite things were my Pelican writing, my helicopter and my kite flying and picture. my mum was happy to listen to me reading and showing all my learning. My goal is to listen  on the mat and when the teacher  leaves me to write I will carry on by myself.                    

Tuesday, 12 August 2014

Fractions

These are fractions. There are half shapes (pentagon and heart shapes) and 2 quarters (the kite) and the star is a whole.

Tuesday, 29 July 2014

my circuit poem

Circuits are when I train my body to get fit.
i see people doing exercise

i feel the wind on my face
I smell wet sand  
I taste water

Tuesday, 3 June 2014

Poetry Cafe

I read out my own poem at the poetry cafe. I felt excited to speak in front of an audience. Here is my poem

Christmas day
excited to see
if there was a  present
waiting for me                                                                                                                                               I ran into my bedroom                                                              
I rushed to find a present
just for me
Lollies.